Giải đề"Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are these factors? And among them, which one is more important than others."IELTS WRITING (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR đi thi đạt 6.0)

Bên cạnh giải đáp Vì sao IELTS Writing Học Mãi vẫn 5.0?, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are these factors? And among them, which one is more important than others."IELTS WRITING (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR đi thi đạt 6.0)

Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are these factors? And among them, which one is more important than others.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Với dạng 2 question này phân bố bố cục như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's success?
    • Main idea 1: When measuring a country's success, education is undoubtedly a critical factor
      • Supporting idea: A good education system is vital for the development of any nation >> Schools, colleges and universities bear the responsibility for the quality of future generations of workers I  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ Vựng Topic Education / WORK IELTS 
      • Example: South Korea's remarkable investment in education, including high school and college attendance, has transformed it from a post-war, underdeveloped nation into a highly educated, developed country with a robust economy, skilled workforce, and global industry leadership.

    • Main idea 2: The quality and accessibility of healthcare services, life expectancy, and overall well-being indicators are vital to evaluate the overall health of a population.
      • Supporting idea: Healthcare provision is also an indicator of the standard of living within a country >> This can be measured by looking at average life expectancy rates or availability of medical services   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Health / Health care / Medicine IELTS
      • Example: Cuba stands as an example of a country with a relatively low GDP per capita but a high standard of living, thanks to its universal healthcare system, which offers free healthcare to all citizens and contributes to a remarkable life expectancy rate of 80.1 years.

  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi Do you think one factor is more important than others?
    • Main idea: a country’s education system should be seen as the most important indicator of its success and level of development.
      • Supporting idea: Education has a considerable effect on the other two factors mentioned above. 
        • It affects people’s health in the sense that doctors and nurses need to be trained, and scientists need to be educated to the highest levels before they can carry out medical research.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "effect" tiếng anh
        • It also affects the economy in the sense that a well-educated workforce will allow a variety of companies and industries to flourish, leading to trade with other countries, and increased wealth.
      • Example: Singapore's world-class education system, characterized by academic excellence and high literacy rates, has contributed to its exceptional health, economic prosperity, and a life expectancy of 84.8 years, underscoring the pivotal role of education in fostering economic growth and enhancing overall well-being.

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