Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ"Some people think that charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own country. But others believe that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 từng bước phân tích để nắm cách chia bố cục cũng như viết bài không sai task response nhé!
I. Đề bài
Some people think that charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own country. But others believe that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
II. Từ vựng
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng & Ideas topic "charity" IELTS
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Nếu ủng hộ quan điểm số 2 thì có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm số 1 "charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own country"
- Main idea 1: Their resources come from local people, and when this money is utilized for the benefit of the local, it is fully justified >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ"utilize"tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: This is because it reinforces a sense of solidarity and addresses immediate needs within the same community
- Example: Food banks collect food donations from individuals, businesses, and organizations, and then distribute that food to people in need. This helps to ensure that everyone in the community has access to healthy food, regardless of their income.
- Main idea 2: Many charitable organizations have limited resources, meaning that if they attempt to do this, they will only antagonize the local community that funds their initiatives. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ"resource" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Many charitable organizations have limited resources because they rely on donations from individuals, businesses, and foundations.
- These donations can be unpredictable, and they can fluctuate depending on the economy, natural disasters, and other factors.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 1: Their resources come from local people, and when this money is utilized for the benefit of the local, it is fully justified >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ"utilize"tiếng anh
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm số 2 & nhấn mạnh mình ủng hộ quan điểm này"these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live"
- Main idea 1: It will help in building harmonious relations between nations >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "relation" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- When charitable organizations provide aid to people in need, it shows that they have compassion and understanding for the challenges that people face.
- This can help to build goodwill and understanding between different nations.
- Example:
- Oxfam has provided food and water to people in need in many countries, including Sudan, Ethiopia, and Haiti. This has helped to improve the lives of millions of people and has built goodwill between the countries where Oxfam has worked.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- UNICEF has provided education and healthcare to children in many developing countries. This has helped to improve the lives of millions of children and has built a sense of shared humanity between people from different nations.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: By providing aid, these organizations can expand their wings towards the most needed ones. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: When charitable organizations provide aid to people in need in different countries, they are able to reach a wider audience and help more people)
- Supporting idea: This is important because there are many people in need all over the world, and charitable organizations can only do so much if they only focus on their own country.
- Main idea 1: It will help in building harmonious relations between nations >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "relation" tiếng anh
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