Phân tích "Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged
    • Main idea 1: It motivates them to work hard and understand their true potential by achieving their aim  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Children who compete need to push beyond their own limits and improve themselves)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Competition enhances motivation and gives a sense of accomplishment. 
        • A healthy competition may build a child’s self-confidence and determination to accomplish the goal in competitive situations. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ accomplish
        • A competitive spirit as a child produces a stronger and more capable adult.
      • Example: For example, a competitive sports day in primary school can help them to try their best and be proud of their achievements.
    • Main idea 2: Competitive academic system enables children to understand their own strengths and weaknesses >> IELTS tUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "enable" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It helps them to prepare for the world of real work where they will have to compete with others on a daily basis. 
        • If the standards and goals of a person are not set high from a young age in this present era, they are left to lead a substandard lifestyle in the future.
      • Example: The notion of seeking high-paying employment with an ordinary college degree has become old-fashioned. Therefore, If an individual does not possess an array of qualifications and skills, they are considered ineligible for a majority of lucrative job roles in reputed organizations. 
    • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác: a competitive structure can teach children the concepts of fair play, dignity and self-discipline which are critical skills needed in adult life.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Cooperation will allow children to understand and adjust to the requirements of others in their team. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "requirement" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: It will encourage children to have a good relationship with others and respect others’ opinions
      • Example: For example, if children cooperate, they can understand the importance of sharing, exchanging ideas and help, accepting and respecting each other’s opinions, and tolerating each other. 
    • Main idea 2: Cooperating teaches children the importance of team work, good communication and empathy.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • A cooperative basis for raising a child may be more emotionally beneficial and result in confident, balanced young people who know they have the support of others. 
        • In highly competitive environments the mental and physical health of children can often be affected. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "health" tiếng anh
      • Example:  For instance, a student who works as part of a team in school may also find it is easy to work or even lead teams at work as an adult. 

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