Phân tích"Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planet to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (COMPUTER-BASED 29/7/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planet to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (COMPUTER-BASED 29/7/2022).

Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planet to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: The population explosion is the first urgent matter urging results from space studies. 
      • Supporting idea: The world is facing the threat from the lack of land and accommodation for the ever-increasing rate of birth, and this forces humans to resort to alternatives of changing living places to other planets. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ LACK trong tiếng anh 
      • Example: Especially in densely populated cities like …., it is a common picture of people struggling to find an apartment. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng tiếng anh topic "apartment"
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Another thing which justifies the budget spent on discovering a new suitable home for human beings is the depletion of natural resources, such as fuel and water. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: One obvious problem is the uncontrolled consumption of natural resources, which are being depleted as a result) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "as a result (of)" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:
        • Unfortunately, fossil fuel and water reservoir are being over-exploited for short-term benefits.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the extraction of fossil fuels, such as coal, gas and oil to satisfy growing energy demands has serious environmental impacts, and these resources will eventually run out)
        • In the long term, the essential elements for life sustainability will be used up, and human life will be put at stake since there is no fuel to maintain production or transportation. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Climate scientists believe this degradation will rapidly extend to the lives of ordinary people and result in a global scarcity of natural resources and more intense natural disasters)
        • If there is even a fragile hope to discover a new environment, people should value the opportunity and invest money in research on the space to ensure the survival of human race. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: If these predictions are accurate, then we need a backup plan involving the evacuation of Earth to ensure human survival and prosperity for future generations)
      • Example: 

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