Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: Extra tree shade is generated when more trees are planted in open areas, which not only promotes the aesthetics of the city but also helps to lower the city’s temperature.
- Supporting idea:
- It provides more space to elders and youngsters to do some physical activities in this relaxing environment. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "activity" tiếng anh
- Parks and gardens stand out and mitigate living apart from the natural world.
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: Extra tree shade is generated when more trees are planted in open areas, which not only promotes the aesthetics of the city but also helps to lower the city’s temperature.
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: these plants assist in reducing urban air pollution and noise levels and then promote higher living standards. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Paraphrase "air pollution" (Diễn đạt "ô nhiễm không khí")
- Supporting idea:
- Sowing plants and trees in the city’s open space is indispensable for living things and the environment. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "environment" tiếng anh
- Tree leaves are great absorbers, especially of carbon dioxide and dust.
- Trees generate oxygen, which can help to reduce pollution in cities and improve air quality.
- Plants take up dust and harmful gases like carbon dioxide and provide pure air, and with the help of trees, the air pollution levels would decrease.
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: these plants assist in reducing urban air pollution and noise levels and then promote higher living standards. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Paraphrase "air pollution" (Diễn đạt "ô nhiễm không khí")
- IELTS TUTOR gợi ý ý khác:
- Main idea: planting trees give shelter to numerous birds.
- Supporting idea:
- Several bird species have become bygones, and some are on the verge of extinction with the minuscule number of plants. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form của "extinction"
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
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