Phân tích "Some people prefer to see live events (such as music and sports), but others think it is better to watch the events on television. Discuss both of the views and give your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people prefer to see live events (such as music and sports), but others think it is better to watch the events on television. Discuss both of the views and give your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people prefer to see live events (such as music and sports), but others think it is better to watch the events on television. Discuss both of the views and give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think it is better to watch the events on television 
    • Main idea 1: those watching TV broadcasted events are likely to see more parts of a show more clearly thanks to the intention of the TV director and movements of cameramen.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • New technology enables viewers to record the event and watch it at a time that is most convenient for them >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "CONVENIENT" tiếng anh 
        • In contrast, the seating arrangement can greatly affect the comfort of seeing the whole show if the seats are far from the stage or playground.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: They might find inconvenience in buying tickets or preparing a travelling plan to execute their attendance >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "find" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Oftentimes people have to travel long distances and take time off of work or school in order to witness one of their favourite celebrities acting or singing.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people prefer to see live events (such as music and sports) & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: spectators can feel the euphoria of watching their favourite celebrities directly on the spot >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "feel like + sth/ving"
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Being a part of the cheering crowd, live attendees can enjoy their passion to the fullest, which evokes far more excitement and amusement than any recorded versions do. 
        • It allows the audience to truly immerse in every moment with all the dances, cheers, applause, and a sense of community >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic "community" 
      • Example: For example, going to a football match is not only watching players and goals but also being a part of the cheering crowd to warm the environment, and this eagerness to be a part of the spectacle draws me to the stadium quite often.
    • Main idea 2: attending a show in person is the only chance for die-hard fans to interact and show their appreciation (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: attending live performances gives the audience a chance to have personal interactions with their favorite artists or athletes)
      • Supporting idea: They can even have a chance to interact with people on stage and become an actual part of the performance >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "performance"
      • Example: 

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