Phân tích"Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence for films of television and cinema. Others feel that violent film should be not censored. Discuss both view and five your opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence for films of television and cinema. Others feel that violent film should be not censored. Discuss both view and five your opinion?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others feel that violent film should be not censored 
    • Main idea 1: the majority of individuals have no difficulty distinguishing between fiction and reality (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The majority of these people are mature enough, they do not copy this stuff in their real life)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Film IELTS
      • Supporting idea:  There is even the slight chance that by watching violent entertainment, audiences will be dissuaded from such behavior or feel their need for violence has been sufficiently expressed  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: They watch the movies, make their brain relaxed and then forget the events)
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: certain viewers has a propensity to enjoy and relaxation after seeing episodes of thrill and war. 
      • Supporting idea: Clips without violence are not palatable to them.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence for films of television and cinema & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "regulate" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 1: The worry is that very young children and teenagers will become desensitized to violence and potentially establish either a confrontational way of interacting or, in extreme cases, a pattern of behavior (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Violence has multiple impacts on human psychology)
      • Supporting idea:  Some young boys seek pleasure by copying this sort of crimes in real life being impressed by their heroes (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Media violence can stimulate fear in some children as it frightens them, making the effects long lasting
      • Example: Kids choose to get guns and pistols in the form of toys after watching violence on media screen
    • Main idea 2: Reducing the amount of violence on TV and in the cinema would certainly be a good start to decrease violence   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "regulate" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 

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