Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people believe that sports competition are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore youth should be banned from participating in sports competition. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 4/3/2023)
I. Đề bài
Some people believe that sports competition are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore youth should be banned from participating in sports competition. Do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
- Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Main idea: Participating in sports competitions can improve physical health and fitness, which is important for the overall well-being of young people.
- Supporting idea: Regular exercise and physical activity can help to reduce the risk of many health problems, such as obesity, diabetes, and heart disease.
- Example: My friend Jessica's commitment to regular basketball practice exemplifies how participation in competitive sports significantly enhances physical health, fostering cardiovascular strength, muscle tone, coordination, and overall well-being, thus reducing the risk of chronic diseases like diabetes or heart disease in the future.
- Main idea: Participating in sports competitions can improve physical health and fitness, which is important for the overall well-being of young people.
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Main idea: Secondly, sports competitions can help young people to build self-confidence and develop important social skills >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "important" (diễn đạt "quan trọng")
- Supporting idea:
- Through sports competitions, young people can learn to set and achieve goals, handle success and failure, and work effectively in a team.
- These skills are not only valuable for sports, but also for many other areas of life, including school, work, and personal relationships >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng giới từ "including"
- Example: A 2018 study published in the Journal of Sport and Exercise Psychology explored this connection. Researchers followed a group of adolescents participating in various team sports over a one-year period.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: Secondly, sports competitions can help young people to build self-confidence and develop important social skills >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "important" (diễn đạt "quan trọng")
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
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