Phân tích"Some people believe that sports competition are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore youth should be banned from participating in sports competition. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 4/3/2023 & 9/4/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people believe that sports competition are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore youth should be banned from participating in sports competition. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 4/3/2023)

Some people believe that sports competition are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore youth should be banned from participating in sports competition. Do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Participating in sports competitions can improve physical health and fitness, which is important for the overall well-being of young people. 
      • Supporting idea: Regular exercise and physical activity can help to reduce the risk of many health problems, such as obesity, diabetes, and heart disease. 
      • Example: My friend Jessica's commitment to regular basketball practice exemplifies how participation in competitive sports significantly enhances physical health, fostering cardiovascular strength, muscle tone, coordination, and overall well-being, thus reducing the risk of chronic diseases like diabetes or heart disease in the future.
         
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Secondly, sports competitions can help young people to build self-confidence and develop important social skills >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "important" (diễn đạt "quan trọng")
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Through sports competitions, young people can learn to set and achieve goals, handle success and failure, and work effectively in a team. 
        • These skills are not only valuable for sports, but also for many other areas of life, including school, work, and personal relationships >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng giới từ "including"
      • Example: A 2018 study published in the Journal of Sport and Exercise Psychology explored this connection. Researchers followed a group of adolescents participating in various team sports over a one-year period.

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