Phân tích & Sửa đề"Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping their children with schoolwork. Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0 writing, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn kĩ thêm Phân tích & Sửa đề"Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping their children with schoolwork. Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping their children with schoolwork. Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng bài discuss both views nếu ủng hộ quan điểm số 2 là "Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids" có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm 1"Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping their children with schoolwork"  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "devote" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 1: Assisting children with their homework is a great way for parents to discover their kids' strengths and weaknesses in their academic learning   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "assist" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:  
        • Homework assistance allows parents to observe how their children approach and tackle academic challenges. 
        • This insight helps in recognizing the child's preferred learning styles, enabling parents to adapt their support methods accordingly.
      • Example: When parents actively engage in helping their children with homework, they might notice that their child excels in mathematics but struggles with writing. This insight enables parents to tailor their support, providing additional resources or seeking extra help in specific subjects.
    • Main idea 2: It is really difficult for students, especially primary ones to study on their own >> parents could make a huge difference by assisting and encouraging their child’s schoolwork   
      • Supporting idea: Young children in primary school often encounter difficulties in understanding and completing assignments independently.
      • Example: For instance, a child might struggle with grasping new concepts in math or have trouble organizing their thoughts for a writing assignment. With parental assistance, such as explaining concepts in a simplified manner or helping with structuring ideas, children can overcome these hurdles more effectively.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm 2"Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids" (là quan điểm mình ủng hộ, nhớ nhấn mạnh ủng hộ quan điểm )  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "allocate" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 1: It can help children to form a strong emotional bonding while competing and cooperating with their family
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When children participate in friendly competitions or collaborative activities with their family, it creates shared experiences that contribute to building emotional connections. 
        • Competing in games or working together on projects allows children to experience a range of emotions such as joy, excitement, and a sense of achievement.
    • Main idea 2: Playing sports with children does help both kids and parents to lead a healthy lifestyle    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "lead" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: The shared commitment to staying active not only contributes to the family's overall health but also sets a positive example for the children, encouraging them to adopt a lifelong habit of regular physical activity.
      • Example: A family regularly participates in weekend sports activities together, such as playing soccer in the park or going for a family bike ride. 

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