Phân tích & Sửa đề"Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations"IELTS WRITING

Bên cạnh Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0 writing, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn kĩ thêm Phân tích & Sửa đề"Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations"IELTS WRITING

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng bài discuss both views nếu ủng hộ quan điểm số 2"it is better to try and improve such situations" có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về ý kiến 1"it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money"
    • Main idea 1: Change is risky and requires massive effort. 
      • Supporting idea: By accepting unfavourable situations, at least people may have a better sense of security, and this, psychologically, increases their happiness to some extent.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "favourable" tiếng anh
      • Example: When a person tries to find another job, there is no guarantee that the new job can offer them more satisfaction (Hoặc: They are worried that they may have to stay jobless for a while and struggle to pay their bills before they can find employment again) (Viết liên quan đến an unsatisfactory job) 
    • Main idea 2: Those supporting this idea believe that good or bad situations occur as part of their fate (Hoặc:  There are also some bad situations that are beyond our power to improve)     >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt Occur, Happen & Take place
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: In a few serious cases, such as wars or severe economic downturns, it could be hazardous and virtually impossible for an individual to change the situation, so it may be better to be satisfied with what life brings to them (Viết liên quan đến shortage of money)
  • Body 2: Viết về ý kiến 2 (nhấn mạnh ủng hộ)"it is better to try and improve such situations"
    • Main idea 1: Only by solving the existing problems, not by simply accepting them, can people discover their abilities and improve their skills >>  the effort to better unfavourable situations would be rewarded.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "reward" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:  Suppose a person is unhappy with his current professio; in that case, he should look out for opportunities that will allow him to be happy and help him grow monetarily. 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2:  Those who try to improve their unsatisfactory situations can find ultimate happiness and live their lives to the fullest    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic HAPPINESS trong IELTS SPEAKING
      • Supporting idea: Working hard to change the status quo gives people a goal to achieve in life, which makes them much happier since humans are goal-driven creatures.
      • Example: 

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