Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe famous people’s support towards international organizations draws the attentions to problems. All others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. " IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
Some people believe famous people’s support towards international organizations draws the attentions to problems. All others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
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- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm All others think celebrities make the problems less important.
- Main idea 1: When relying on the fame of some people to attract more public attention, an aid programme can also be affected by their scandals.
- Supporting idea: Mass public disapproval may arise from a representative receiving a speeding ticket, or getting caught using illegal drugs, undervaluing the significance of the aid programme.
- Example:
- Main idea 2: the public might take the presence of famous entertainers as a mere publicity stunt.
- Supporting idea:
- People might perceive their contributions to international aid organisations as their business strategy to advertise themselves, and to gain more fame.
- Without the evidence of real actions taken to mitigate a problem, such as participating in a voluntary team to help the people in need, famous people may fail to draw the attention of people to the situation. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "evidence" tiếng anh
- Example: numerous Hollywood movie stars engage themselves in voluntary work for international charities, but their endeavour is less likely to be appreciated due to misconceptions of the public.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 1: When relying on the fame of some people to attract more public attention, an aid programme can also be affected by their scandals.
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe famous people’s support towards international organizations draws the attentions to problems. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này.
- Main idea 1: people who are considered role models have considerable influence on the public
- Supporting idea: It is evident that they can positively influence their fans who can be encouraged to participate in charitable activities held by the organisations.
- Example: Emma Watson, for instance, being a prominent actress, is currently the goodwill ambassador for the United Nations, promoting gender equality and undoubtedly drawing a great deal of attention from her admirers. >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Từ vựng topic "bình đẳng (Equality)" IELTS
- Main idea 2: a wider range of population can be reached if an organisation’s campaign is represented by a popular star (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the support of celebrities will create public awareness about the problems that need to be dealt with)
- Supporting idea:
- In many parts of the world, some film stars are even more well-known to the locals than the organisation itself owing to their appearance in familiar cinematic products.
- Therefore the introduction of a humanitarian campaign can be further facilitated thanks to the artists. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE trong tiếng anh
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 1: people who are considered role models have considerable influence on the public
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm All others think celebrities make the problems less important.
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