Phân tích "Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 28/5/2024)

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others believe that education will not work. 
    • Main idea 1: Junk food is heavily marketed, readily available, and often cheaper than healthier options. 
      • Supporting idea: These factors can make it challenging for individuals, especially those with limited resources, to resist junk food temptations.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: 
        • For example, a character in a popular movie might be seen drinking a sugary soda or eating a bag of chips.
        • For example, a candy company might have a social media account where they share photos and videos of their products, as well as run contests and giveaways.
    • Main idea 2: Low-income communities may have limited access to nutritious foods and rely more on inexpensive, calorie-dense junk food. 
      • Supporting idea: Addressing this issue requires broader systemic changes beyond education.
      • Example: A study in Chicago found that people living in food deserts were more likely to be obese than people living in areas with better access to healthy food.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Education can raise awareness about the adverse health effects of excessive junk food consumption, including obesity, heart disease, diabetes, and dental problems. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Supporting idea: When people are informed, they may make healthier dietary choices.
      • Example: A study published in the journal Appetite revealed that providing information about the health risks of junk food can lead to reduced consumption of junk food and an increase in healthier food choices among participants.
    • Main idea 2: With the right information, individuals can make informed decisions about their food choices. 
      • Supporting idea: They can better understand nutritional labels, portion sizes, and the importance of a balanced diet.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Many scientists agree that excessive junk food consumption is harmful to health, with some believing education can resolve this issue, while others argue that education alone is insufficient. I align with the former perspective.

Those who believe education will not work argue that junk food is heavily marketed, readily available, and often cheaper than healthier options. Marketing strategies, such as featuring characters in movies drinking sugary sodas or candy companies using social media to promote their products, make junk food appealing and hard to resist. Moreover, low-income communities may have limited access to nutritious foods and rely more on inexpensive, calorie-dense junk food. For example, a study in Chicago found that people living in food deserts were more likely to be obese than those with better access to healthy food. Addressing these systemic issues requires more than just educational campaigns; it demands policy changes and economic interventions to ensure healthier food options are accessible and affordable.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, proponents of education argue that it can raise awareness about the adverse health effects of junk food, such as obesity, heart disease, diabetes, and dental problems. Educating people about these risks can lead to healthier dietary choices. A study published in the journal Appetite revealed that informing participants about the health risks associated with junk food consumption resulted in reduced junk food intake and an increase in healthier food choices. Additionally, with proper education, individuals can make more informed decisions regarding their diets, understanding nutritional labels, portion sizes, and the importance of a balanced diet.

In conclusion, while both perspectives offer valid insights, I find myself aligning more closely with the former perspective that emphasizes education as a fundamental solution to address the detrimental effects of excessive junk food consumption.

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