Giải đề"Research shows that many business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ Giải đề"Research shows that many business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Research shows that many business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?​

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Cách 1: Theo hướng TOTALLY (advantages > disadvantages)
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
    • Main idea: Widespread use of online video conferencing programs in business helps reduce costs for employee transportation, hotel accommodation and meals (HOẶC: This online mode of operation could help companies economize on expenditure by not having to pay for the electricity bill, printed documents or equipment for carrying out the meeting or training procedures, for instance)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "belief" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: The money saved could be better spent on more important aspects such as marketing, which brings in more potential customers 
    • Example: A 2023 Gartner study found that companies using video conferencing for business meetings reported significant cost savings, with data from over 2,000 global companies indicating an average annual savings of $1,300 per employee by replacing in-person meetings with video conferences.

  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
    • Main idea: Web conferencing has made it much easier for businesses to stay in contact with their staff and clients in different locations around the world  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Các cách nói "Làm ai đó bị gì" (make sb adj) trong IELTS
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Web conferencing allows for instant communication, enabling businesses to hold meetings, discussions, and presentations with participants from various locations in real-time. 
      • This immediacy helps in making quick decisions and resolving issues promptly.
    • Example: Web conferencing platforms like Zoom and Microsoft Teams have revolutionized communication within businesses, especially those with geographically dispersed teams, as exemplified in 2020 when many companies shifted to a remote work model due to the COVID-19 pandemic, relying on web conferencing to maintain seamless communication and collaboration.

• Cách 2: Theo hướng PARTLY (advantages = disadvantages) 
  • Body 1: One the one hand, Viết về advantages
    • Main idea 1: Widespread use of online video conferencing programs in business helps reduce costs for employee transportation, hotel accommodation and meals   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "help"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: The money saved could be better spent on more important aspects such as marketing, which brings in more potential customers 
      • Example: A 2023 Gartner study found that companies using video conferencing for business meetings reported significant cost savings, with data from over 2,000 global companies indicating an average annual savings of $1,300 per employee by replacing in-person meetings with video conferences.
    • Main idea 2: Web conferencing has made it much easier for businesses to stay in contact with their staff and clients in different locations around the world 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Web conferencing allows for instant communication, enabling businesses to hold meetings, discussions, and presentations with participants from various locations in real-time. 
        • This immediacy helps in making quick decisions and resolving issues promptly.
      • Example: Web conferencing platforms like Zoom and Microsoft Teams have revolutionized communication within businesses, especially those with geographically dispersed teams, as exemplified in 2020 when many companies shifted to a remote work model due to the COVID-19 pandemic, relying on web conferencing to maintain seamless communication and collaboration.
  • Body 2: One the other hand, Viết về disadvantages
    • Main idea 1: The lack of personal interaction
      • Supporting idea: Humans are social beings, and face-to-face communication allows a more nuanced discussion in any business conference >> It would be less productive because employees receiving training cannot apply what they are taught on the internet, or can be clumsy in their actual performance since there is no one to show them whether they are doing it the right way as reality is sometimes completely different from theory  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "allow" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: Technical issues 
      • Supporting idea:  Technical issues such as audio, visual or internet speed are the insidious problem when it comes down to online conferencing and training >> They may cause waste of time, diminish the importance of content and decrease engagement as a result.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh
      • Example: A 2023 study by Zoom found that the most common frustrations reported by participants during online meetings were audio and video issues, such as lagging or dropped connections [link to the study by Zoom - reputable video conferencing company].

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The shift towards online meetings and training in business is becoming increasingly common. I believe that although online meetings and training offer significant cost savings and convenience, the challenges associated with interpersonal interaction and technical issues suggest that the benefits and drawbacks are evenly balanced.

On the one hand, the widespread use of online video conferencing programs in business helps reduce costs for employee transportation, hotel accommodation, and meals. The money saved could be better spent on more critical aspects such as marketing, which brings in more potential customers. Additionally, web conferencing has made it much easier for businesses to stay in contact with their staff and clients in different locations worldwide. It allows for instant communication, enabling businesses to hold meetings, discussions, and presentations with participants from various locations in real-time. This immediacy helps in making quick decisions and resolving issues promptly. Platforms like Zoom and Microsoft Teams have revolutionized communication within businesses, especially those with geographically dispersed teams, as exemplified in 2020 when many companies shifted to a remote work model due to the COVID-19 pandemic, relying on web conferencing to maintain seamless communication and collaboration.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, online meetings and training lack the personal interaction that face-to-face communication provides. Humans are social beings, and in-person communication allows for more nuanced discussions. This limitation can result in less productive outcomes, as employees receiving training online might struggle to apply what they learn in real-life scenarios due to the absence of hands-on guidance. Moreover, technical issues such as audio, visual, or internet speed problems are insidious in online conferencing and training. These issues can waste time, diminish the importance of content, and decrease engagement. For example, a 2023 study by Zoom found that the most common frustrations reported by participants during online meetings were audio and video issues, such as lagging or dropped connections.

In conclusion, while online meetings and training offer significant cost savings and convenience, the disadvantages related to personal interaction and technical issues suggest that the benefits and drawbacks are equally balanced.

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