Phân tích "Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY THEO QUAN ĐIỂM”Life experiences significantly affect people’s personalities, and traits keep changing”có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY THEO QUAN ĐIỂM”Life experiences significantly affect people’s personalities, and traits keep changing” 
    • Main idea: Work experiences, education, family conditions and communities have a profound impact on the character of a person. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Communities, family conditions, education and friends have a deeper effect on a person’s character)
      • Supporting idea: Life experiences, whether positive or negative, shape our individualistic selves and allow us to deal with different people differently, depending upon the situation and their behaviour towards us. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "towards" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
        • For example, an accident may affect a person’s life in a way that their perspective towards life will change forever. 
        • For instance, the degree of transformation that a person undergoes between the ages of 13 to 20 can be a testament to the fact that our life experiences can drastically change our nature.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY THEO QUAN ĐIỂM”Life experiences significantly affect people’s personalities, and traits keep changing” 
    • Main idea: Experiences can enrich inborn characteristics to enhance a person’s development. 
      • Supporting idea: To explain, if parents discover that their child has a special interest in arts as a child, they can create favorable conditions where the child can learn through experiences. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "discover" 
      • Example: 

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