Phân tích "The range and quality of food which people buy has been changed by technological and scientific advances. Some people think the range and quality has been improved, while some people think the change is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The range and quality of food which people buy has been changed by technological and scientific advances. Some people think the range and quality has been improved, while some people think the change is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

The range and quality of food which people buy has been changed by technological and scientific advances. Some people think the range and quality has been improved, while some people think the change is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm some people think the change is harmful 
    • Main idea 1: They argue that certain technological and scientific practices, such as the use of pesticides and artificial additives, may have negative impacts on human health and the environment. 
      • Supporting idea: They express worries about the long-term consequences of genetic modification and the potential loss of biodiversity. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "consequence" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
        • GMOs can cross-pollinate with wild plants, which could lead to the loss of biodiversity.
        • GMOs that are resistant to herbicides can lead to increased herbicide use, which could pollute the environment and harm wildlife.
    • Main idea 2: Moreover, the industrialization of food production has led to the mass production of processed and unhealthy foods, contributing to issues like obesity, chronic diseases, and unsustainable agricultural practices. >> IELTS TUTOR Paraphrase từ"disease"(Diễn đạt"bệnh tật"tiếng anh)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • As more and more people work long hours, they have less time to cook at home. 
        • This has led to an increase in the consumption of processed foods, which are often less healthy than home-cooked meals.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm  Some people think the range and quality has been improved & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: They have led to an expansion in the range and improved quality of food. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Advances in agricultural practices, such as genetic modification and precision farming techniques, have increased crop yields and reduced the susceptibility of plants to diseases. 
        • This has allowed for a wider variety of food options and a more consistent supply throughout the year. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ"consistent"tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Additionally, advancements in food processing, packaging, and preservation technologies have extended the shelf life of products, maintaining their quality and freshness. 
      • Supporting idea: The availability of nutritious and diverse food options has contributed to improved diets and enhanced culinary experiences for many people.
      • Example: 

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