Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for the people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for the people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
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- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Main idea: The government has got to cover an enormous expenditure if the government provides free public transportation to any or all voters (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: beside the public transport service, there are other fields that need financial investment from the authority to wholly ameliorate the residentsʼ living standard such as transport infrastructure and medical service)
- Supporting idea:
- Several expensive prices for maintaining the general public transportation service like worker payment, electricity, and a spread of vehicles need an outsized budget.
- If local authorities all supports the general public transport system, alternative areas like infrastructures or medical services can not be developed.
- The complete subsidy for the public transport service may not only put the government under unnecessary financial pressure, especially in developing countries, but also require a higher tax payment from the residents. ieltsxpress.com
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: The government has got to cover an enormous expenditure if the government provides free public transportation to any or all voters (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: beside the public transport service, there are other fields that need financial investment from the authority to wholly ameliorate the residentsʼ living standard such as transport infrastructure and medical service)
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Main idea: The standard of public transportation is downgraded
- Supporting idea: with the tones of passengers on buses and subways, the carriages would become dirty, crowded, and uncomfortable >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "subway" tiếng anh
- Example:
- Main idea: The standard of public transportation is downgraded
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
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