Phân tích "Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education, while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích&Bài Sửa HS đạt 7.0"The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce fertiliser (compost)" IELTS WRITING TASK 1, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education, while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education, while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education
    • Main idea 1: University education provides a deeper and broader knowledge base, as well as specialized skills in various fields. 
      • Supporting idea: Graduates are equipped with critical thinking abilities and analytical skills that can be applied to a wide range of professions.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: My friend - Sarah, a software engineer with a degree in computer science from a top university, possesses a deep knowledge of computer science, specialized software development skills, and critical thinking abilities that enhance her value to her employer and career advancement opportunities.
    • Main idea 2: Many professions, such as medicine, law, engineering, and academia, require advanced degrees that can only be obtained through university education. 
      • Supporting idea: Graduates of these programs have access to higher-paying job opportunities.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Vocational training facilities have given students hands-on opportunity to plan their professional paths >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "facility" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: This practical sector has more overt goals of directing the students toward tangible job paths, in contrast to university education, which places a greater emphasis only on theoretical learning. 
      • Example: The Carl Benz School in Stuttgart, Germany, provides vocational training in fields like automotive engineering, mechatronics, and IT, offering students hands-on experience through projects like designing and constructing a race car.
    • Main idea 2: Vocational training fields have higher cost-effective values in terms of both time and money.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • While employment-oriented trainings are far less expensive and more accessible, university education is so expensive that some students are unable to pay it and end up taking out loans. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Most university graduates are burdened with student debt and face uncertain job prospects)
        • Training schools are cheap, fast, and ease students into steady employment immediately.
      • Example: 
        • Someone who is firmly established in such a job in their early 20s does not have to deal with the pressures associated with university life and its incumbent debts. Instead, they can begin to set aside money for a house or start a family.

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