Phân tích "Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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You should finish the task within 40 minutes.

Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: it is an effective deterrent of major crimes.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The best method to prevent a person from committing crime is to show the consequences of his or her actions. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "prevent" tiếng anh 
        • It will deter other similar acts in future since criminally-oriented people will be scared of the outcome.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: capital punishment is indispensable to ensure the well-being of a society 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When criminals are not given the death sentence, justice is not done to the victim and their family because this might lead to counter acts of violence with revenge.
        • In the event of people being murdered for money, lust or greed, society is badly impacted and the death penalty alone can salvage the situation. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "alone" 
      • Example: 

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