Phân tích"With the growing population in cities more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Is it positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 9/11/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"With the growing population in cities more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Is it positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 9/11/2023)

• With the growing population in cities more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Is it positive or negative development?

• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng NEGATIVE):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea: Lack of outdoor space could potentially lead to increased stress, reduced physical activity, and limited exposure to nature, impacting mental and physical well-being.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Without outdoor areas, individuals might experience higher stress levels due to the lack of natural surroundings, which are often associated with relaxation and stress reduction.
      • Limited outdoor space may discourage physical activities such as walking, exercise, or outdoor sports, leading to a more sedentary lifestyle, which can impact overall health.
    • Example: Research conducted in urban environments has shown that residents in areas with limited outdoor spaces experience higher stress levels, reduced opportunities for physical activities, and diminished exposure to nature, impacting their overall mental and physical health.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea: Inadequate access to outdoor areas might diminish the quality of life, reducing opportunities for relaxation, recreation, and contact with nature.
    • Supporting idea:
      • Outdoor spaces often serve as places for relaxation, reducing stress and promoting mental well-being. The absence of these areas can limit relaxation opportunities.
      • Outdoor areas provide spaces for various recreational activities like picnics, sports, and leisurely walks. Inadequate access diminishes these recreational opportunities.
    • Example: For instance, a city district that lacks parks or recreational facilities might see its residents facing challenges in finding areas for leisurely activities or experiencing nature, ultimately impacting their overall quality of life.

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