Phân tích "While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề 16/6/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề 16/6/2024)

While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

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  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: There is a significant and growing demand for skilled tradespeople, including electricians, plumbers, and carpenters. 
      • Supporting idea:
        • Many industries are experiencing a shortage of qualified workers, leading to delays in construction projects, maintenance, and other essential services. 
        • By promoting vocational training, we can help fill these gaps and ensure that these crucial roles are adequately staffed.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR 
      • Example: The demand for skilled tradespeople is outpacing the supply, leading to a significant workforce shortage, with a 2023 report by the Associated Builders and Contractors (ABC) indicating a shortage of over 600,000 workers in the U.S. construction industry
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Many vocational programs are accessible to individuals from various backgrounds and can provide a viable career path for those who might not have the means or desire to pursue a university education.
      • Supporting idea: Encouraging vocational training can help reduce socioeconomic disparities.
      • Example: Consider the example of Year Up, a non-profit organization in the United States that provides intensive vocational training programs targeting young adults from low-income backgrounds, equipping them with technical skills and professional development opportunities, and has demonstrated success in helping graduates secure high-paying jobs in fields like IT and healthcare.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

While many people pursue university education for academic study, there is a compelling case for encouraging more individuals to undertake vocational training. I do agree with this viewpoint for many reasons.

Firstly, there is a significant and growing demand for skilled tradespeople, including electricians, plumbers, and carpenters. Many industries are facing a shortage of qualified workers, leading to delays in construction projects, maintenance, and other essential services. By promoting vocational training, we can help fill these gaps and ensure that these crucial roles are adequately staffed. For instance, the demand for skilled tradespeople is outpacing the supply, leading to a significant workforce shortage, with a 2023 report by the Associated Builders and Contractors (ABC) indicating a shortage of over 600,000 workers in the U.S. construction industry.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)

Secondly, many vocational programs are accessible to individuals from various backgrounds and can provide a viable career path for those who might not have the means or desire to pursue a university education. Encouraging vocational training can help reduce socioeconomic disparities by offering an alternative pathway to financial stability and career success. Consider the example of Year Up, a non-profit organization in the United States that provides intensive vocational training programs targeting young adults from low-income backgrounds. This program equips them with technical skills and professional development opportunities and has demonstrated success in helping graduates secure high-paying jobs in fields like IT and healthcare.

In conclusion, encouraging vocational training is crucial to addressing the shortage of skilled tradespeople and providing accessible career opportunities for diverse populations, thus promoting economic stability and reducing socioeconomic disparities.

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