Phân tích "Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour 
    • Main idea 1: A host country can create a vibrant cosmopolitan atmosphere, which in turn develops a keen sense of tolerance between the foreigners and the local people.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng cụm"complex"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Cultural diversity makes a country a more attractive place to live in.
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: For example, citizens from diverse cultures contribute to different experiences, solving problems, language proficiency, and new approaches of thinking to name but a few.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: the refusal to adapt to host environment would create a cultural barrier for immigrants.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Newcomers will certainly face difficulties if they do not conform to the norms of social behaviour in the host country)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It will become almost impossible for them to blend into their new environment. 
        • This leads to social isolation, which has negative influences on people’s lives. 
        • If immigrants behave in accordance with the local norms, they will be accepted easily by local inhabitants, and as a result, they can receive/gain respects and affections as well as some help from the local. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: local people will be more welcoming when they feel that the newcomers are showing respect for the local way of life HOẶC: The establishment of closer links with the host community might lead to greater integration and mutual understanding) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "understanding" tiếng anh 
      • Example: For example, when the enterprises want to expand their production in a new country, they must be aware of business practices there, which provides them with useful information to maximise profits. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: For example, an entrepreneur who comes to live in a new country and starts up a business must be aware of the business practices of that country) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "useful / useless" tiếng anh 
    • Main idea 2: it is logical/true that limited knowledge of local customs may result in some illegal actions in the host country and make local/native people unpleased. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For instance, in Singapore, one of the cleanest countries in Asia, local residents consider anyone dirty and ill-mannered if they litter the street or spit gum in the public. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: In Singapore, for instance, residents will consider newcomers dirty and ill-mannered if they litter the street or spit gum in public places)

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