Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and year after it was refurbished. The charts showed a result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods." IELTS WRITING TASK 1
I. Đề bài
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and year after it was refurbished. The charts showed a result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- Thanks to the restoration, this museum attracted a higher number of visitors.
- Their satisfaction level increased significantly, demonstrated by the increasing satisfaction level after that. >> IELTS TUTOR Phân biệt "satisfied, satisfaction, satisfactory"
- Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
- In the year prior to its reconstruction, Ashdown Museum received 74,000 visitors; however, this figure increased substantially to 92,000 in the year after, with a clear increase of 18,000 people.
- Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
- Only 15% and 30% of respondents said they were very satisfied and satisfied with their experience during the year prior to the refurbishing, compared to 35% and 40% who said the same after the rejuvenation, bringing the overall proportion up to 75%.
- The rate of unsatisfied visitors noticeably reduced from 40% to 15% in the year following renovation.
- The percentage of respondents who were very unsatisfied with their visit dropped to 5%. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng Figure / percentage / proportion
- Overall:
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