Phân tích "Video records are a better way to learn about the way other people in the world live rather than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 28/8/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Video records are a better way to learn about the way other people in the world live rather than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 14/1/2023)

Video records are a better way to learn about the way other people in the world live rather than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Written documents are more easily accessible and are faster to go through than film records.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ"accessible"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Historical or biographical books about past events are available in every bookstore and public library, whereas filmed records sometimes are not accessible for people from other countries.
        • Written documents are suitable for people who want to get only a brief review of past events because they can flip through the pages quickly.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Diễn đạt "cập nhật tin tức" tiếng anh (Paraphrase "upda...
      • Example: As a student writing a research paper, I can efficiently locate pertinent information in written documents by employing keywords and search terms, whereas searching for information in film records may prove to be more challenging, potentially necessitating the viewing of the entire film to locate the desired information.

  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: written documents are usually peer-reviewed because they offer an overall perspective verified by historians.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: written documents are much more objective and can be verified through independent sources)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • While video records stand to be biased because they mostly are for personal uses at that time, documents such as diaries and letters can be cross-referenced against other documents that were written around the same time.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "restriction" tiếng anh
        • This is not possible with a video record as there is no way to verify the accuracy of the information presented.
      • Example: The Journal of American History is a peer-reviewed academic journal specializing in American history, where all submitted articles undergo evaluation by two or more field experts known as "peer reviewers" who assess the research quality, argument validity, and writing clarity.

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