Phân tích "Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Building new housing and infrastructure in the countryside could lead to environmental damage and habitat destruction, as well as increased energy usage and greenhouse gas emissions from increased transportation and heating/cooling needs.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Constructing new housing and infrastructure in the countryside often requires clearing land, which can result in the destruction of natural habitats. 
        • This loss of habitat can have detrimental effects on local wildlife, leading to biodiversity loss and ecosystem disruption.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: Building a new highway in the Amazon rainforest would require cutting down a lot of trees, which would destroy the homes of many plants and animals. This would also fragment the rainforest, making it difficult for animals to move around. 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Moving employees to the countryside could result in longer commute times and increased traffic on rural roads, as well as decreased access to amenities and services such as schools, healthcare, and entertainment.
      • Supporting idea:
        • If employees move to the countryside, where housing is typically more spread out, it can result in longer commute times to their workplaces located in urban or suburban areas. 
        • Longer commutes not only consume more time but can also contribute to stress, fatigue, and reduced work-life balance.
        • With more employees commuting to work from the countryside, there is a higher likelihood of increased traffic on rural roads. 
        • These roads are often not designed to handle heavy traffic volumes, leading to congestion, slower travel times, and potential safety concerns.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
      • Example: Woodstock is a small town in Vermont that is home to a number of businesses and organizations. In recent years, there has been an increase in the number of employees who commute to work from the countryside. This has led to increased traffic on the rural roads that lead to Woodstock.
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác:
    • Main idea: Moving these businesses to the countryside could lead to increased transportation costs, which may offset any potential savings from lower rent or land prices.
    • Supporting idea: Many companies and factories are located in urban areas because of the proximity to transport infrastructure, suppliers, and customers. 

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