Phân tích"Traditional ideas from older people about the way to live and behave are not helpful to young people and their futures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (computer-based 26/11/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Traditional ideas from older people about the way to live and behave are not helpful to young people and their futures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (computer-based 26/11/2023)

Traditional ideas from older people about the way to live and behave are not helpful to young people and their futures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: there are some conventional values which the youngsters should foster as those perspectives are still useful and beneficial in this contemporary era)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Values such as honesty, hard work, helping the needy are lessons taught to us by our forefathers and they need to be carried on.
        • Young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ SENSE trong tiếng anh
      • Example: 
        • Older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "behavior" & "misbehavior"
        • Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: by following mores from the past, young people will have a foundation to judge their present and future actions. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "following" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
        • Tradition serves as an increasingly important guide in a world with few fixed values. 
        • Without these customs to guide their behaviour, young people would be at the mercy of the values espoused in popular media. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "custom" tiếng anh
        • As the world has become more secular, religious values have declined but cultural traditions remain intact. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Word form của "remain"
      • Example:
        • A standout example of this would be the strong familial ties in Asian nations such as Japan, Korea, China, and Vietnam where children in these nations are expected to listen to the advice of their parents, maintain cultural traditions, and behave within certain ethical bounds.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Traditional values passed down by older generations often shape societal norms and individual behaviors. While some argue that these ideas are outdated and irrelevant to the aspirations of young people today, I firmly disagree with this viewpoint for many reasons below.

To begin with, many traditional values retain their relevance in contemporary society. Concepts such as honesty, diligence, and community spirit are timeless virtues that transcend generations. For instance, the emphasis on hard work instilled by previous generations remains crucial in navigating today’s competitive job market. Young individuals who uphold these values often find themselves better equipped to face challenges and achieve long-term success.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Furthermore, traditional values provide a moral compass amidst a rapidly changing world. In an era where popular culture often promotes fleeting trends and instant gratification, adhering to established customs offers stability and guidance. For example, cultural traditions rooted in familial respect and ethical conduct serve as cornerstones in societies like Japan and Vietnam, fostering cohesion and resilience in their youth.

In conclusion, while it is essential to adapt to evolving societal norms, dismissing traditional values entirely would deprive young people of valuable lessons that promote personal and communal well-being. Therefore, I firmly believe that integrating the wisdom of past generations with modern aspirations is pivotal for a balanced and prosperous future.

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