Phân tích "Many people think that too much money is wasted on investment in technical equipment for space exploration and would be beneficial if invested elsewhere. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many people think that too much money is wasted on investment in technical equipment for space exploration and would be beneficial if invested elsewhere. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Many people think that too much money is wasted on investment in technical equipment for space exploration and would be beneficial if invested elsewhere. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Space exploration drives scientific discovery and expands our understanding of the universe. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ"expand"tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It pushes the boundaries of human knowledge, leading to technological advancements that have practical applications beyond space exploration. 
      • Example: 
        • The Voyager 1 and 2 spacecraft are the farthest human-made objects in space. They have been used to study the outer solar system and the interstellar medium, and they have helped us to understand how the solar system formed and evolved.
        • **The Mars rovers have been used to study the surface of Mars, and they have helped us to learn more about the history of Mars and the potential for life on Mars.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Space exploration requires the development of cutting-edge technologies that have far-reaching applications. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "require" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Investments in space programs often lead to advancements in robotics, satellite technology, computer systems, and energy-efficient solutions. 
        • These innovations can have significant benefits for society, driving economic growth and improving everyday life.
      • Example: 
        • The development of MRI technology was inspired by research conducted on the Space Shuttle. Scientists were studying the effects of microgravity on the human body, and they discovered that MRI could be used to create detailed images of the body without the use of radiation. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "detail" & "detailed" tiếng anh 
        • The development of Kevlar was inspired by research conducted on the space program. Scientists were looking for a material that could be used to make bulletproof vests, and they found that Kevlar was a strong and lightweight material that could stop bullets.
        • The development of GPS was inspired by the need to track satellites in space. Scientists developed a system that could track the position of satellites in space, and this system was later adapted to create GPS, which is now used by millions of people around the world.

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