Phân tích"Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Computer-based 21/5/2022 & Đề thi 4/11/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE 
    • Main idea: This affects what people think is important (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the ubiquity of advertisement is distorting people’s perception on what is important in life)
      • Supporting idea: It makes younger generations become more superficial and only care about owning whatever’s considered popular. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "generation" tiếng anh
      • Example: For instance, many teenagers today might feel pressured to have the latest smartphone models, designer clothing, and trendy accessories in order to fit in and gain social approval, often at the expense of saving money for education or experiences that truly enrich their lives.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Advertising has a negative impact on people’s lives
      • Supporting idea: 
        • With the omnipresent advertisement, it could potentially cause people to do impulsive shopping (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: sometimes we buy what tempts us without the insight of what we need actually) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "tempt"
        • People are encouraged by these ads to buy and own more stuff than needed. 
        • One consequence of this indulgence in buying new things is that people are buying more, they are also throwing out more stuff than ever, causing a burden on the environment. 
      • Example: For example, media is flooded with commercials of beauty products, which lures us into buying them, and people, especially women, are crazy about these things and buy them even without consulting their dermatologists. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "ESPECIALLY" & "SPECIALLY" tiếng anh

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Advertising helps people become aware of new products and services that may improve their quality of life. 
      • Supporting idea: Advertising can be a source of information on the latest technological innovations that could make people's lives easier and more convenient.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: For example, through advertising, people can learn about new health supplements or medical treatments that could alleviate their ailments. 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Advertising can be entertaining and add value to people's lives.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Many ads are created with the intention of making people laugh, feel inspired or simply feel good.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Word form của từ "inspire" tiếng anh
        • A well-crafted advertisement can make people smile and forget about their worries, even if it's just for a moment. 
      • Example: For example, a TV commercial for a chocolate bar might feature a funny storyline with adorable characters, which can make viewers smile and feel happy, even if they are going through a stressful day.

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