Phân tích "Today more and more young children have mobile phones. Critics say that this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree? What is your own opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Today more and more young children have mobile phones. Critics say that this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree? What is your own opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Today more and more young children have mobile phones. Critics say that this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree? What is your own opinion?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Excessive screen time and prolonged use of mobile phones may lead to various health issues in children, such as eye strain, disrupted sleep patterns, and even potential long-term effects on brain development.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Staring at screens for extended periods can strain the eyes and lead to symptoms such as dryness, irritation, headaches, and blurry vision, collectively known as digital eye strain or computer vision syndrome.
        • The blue light emitted by screens can interfere with the production of the sleep hormone melatonin, leading to difficulty falling asleep and disrupted sleep patterns.  >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8 [Audio+Transcript]
      • Example: 
        • A study published in the journal Pediatrics found that children who spent more than two hours a day on electronic devices were more likely to be overweight or obese than those who spent less than one hour a day. 
        • Another study, published in the journal Sleep, found that children who used electronic devices in the hour before bed were more likely to have trouble sleeping than those who did not use electronic devices before bed. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI TASK 1 VIẾT THƯ NGÀY 05/7/2020"you are going to take a holiday and your friend agrees to stay at your house. Write a letter to him for"IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH  (kèm bài được sửa HS đạt 6.0 đi thi thật)
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Young children may not fully understand the risks associated with online activities, making them vulnerable to cyberbullying, online predators, or exposure to inappropriate content.
      • Supporting idea:
        • Young children often exhibit a trusting nature, making them more susceptible to manipulation or deception by online predators who exploit their innocence and naivety. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) Some students work while studying. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend and give your opinion?NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: A study published in the journal "Pediatrics" found that children as young as 8 years old are already aware of cyberbullying, but they may not fully understand the risks or how to protect themselves. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0)

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