Phân tích "Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that the benefits of this outweigh the problems?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 23/3/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that the benefits of this outweigh the problems?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that the benefits of this outweigh the problems?

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Studying abroad can be expensive, including tuition fees, living expenses, and travel costs. 
      • Supporting idea: Not all students have the financial means to afford education overseas, leading to increased debt or financial strain.
      • Example: My friend Jessica, a talented aspiring artist, dreamed of studying fashion design in Milan. However, the high tuition fees, combined with the cost of living in a major European city and plane tickets, made the program financially out of reach for her family.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Moving to a new country can be emotionally challenging, especially for students who experience culture shock or language barriers. 
      • Supporting idea: Some students may struggle to integrate into their new environment and feel homesick or isolated.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Example: The 2019 study published in the Journal of International Education Research surveyed students from various countries studying in the US, revealing a high prevalence of culture shock and language barriers as significant stressors, leading to feelings of isolation, loneliness, and difficulty adapting to new social norms, highlighting the emotional impact of moving to a new country and the potential struggles students face integrating into a different culture.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: Many countries offer high-quality education that might not be available in the student's home country. 
        • Supporting idea: This allows students to access a broader range of academic programs and resources.
      • Main idea 2: Studying abroad provides students with the opportunity to immerse themselves in a new culture, language, and way of life. 
        • Supporting idea: This exposure fosters personal growth, intercultural understanding, and global perspective.
        • Example: The transformative power of studying abroad was highlighted in a 2018 study published in the International Journal of Intercultural Relations, which tracked students participating in semester-long programs abroad and found significant growth in intercultural competence, self-awareness, and global perspective, showcasing how immersion in new cultures equips students with valuable skills and a nuanced understanding of the world.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Studying abroad can be expensive, including tuition fees, living expenses, and travel costs. 
        • Supporting idea: Not all students have the financial means to afford education overseas, leading to increased debt or financial strain.
        • Example: My friend Jessica, a talented aspiring artist, dreamed of studying fashion design in Milan. However, the high tuition fees, combined with the cost of living in a major European city and plane tickets, made the program financially out of reach for her family.
      • Main idea 2: Moving to a new country can be emotionally challenging, especially for students who experience culture shock or language barriers. 
        • Supporting idea: Some students may struggle to integrate into their new environment and feel homesick or isolated.
        • Example: The 2019 study published in the Journal of International Education Research surveyed students from various countries studying in the US, revealing a high prevalence of culture shock and language barriers as significant stressors, leading to feelings of isolation, loneliness, and difficulty adapting to new social norms, highlighting the emotional impact of moving to a new country and the potential struggles students face integrating into a different culture.

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