Phân tích "Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(ĐỀ THI 21/10/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(ĐỀ THI 21/10/2023)

Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?

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• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng negative):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao negative (Viết về work)
    • Main idea: The delegation of various mechanical tasks to robots is likely to give rise to greater unemployment figures.
    • Supporting idea:  In the workplace, especially in manufacturing, millions of workers worldwide, particularly unskilled ones, would lose their jobs to cutting-edge robotic systems.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Currently, large numbers of manual workers are being replaced by cutting-edge robotics systems in numerous factories around the world)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic "Work" IELTS 
    • Example: 
      • For example, fully automated processes have already taken over monotonous jobs such as assembly-line workers or bank tellers in many developed countries such as the United States.
      • For instance, thousands of Chinese assembly workers at FoxConn, a major manufacturer of Apple products, have recently been made redundant after the company adopted a fully automated process that minimizes the need for a skilled and unskilled human labor supply.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic "Study" IELTS
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao negative (Viết về home)
    • Main idea: The growth of a robotics industry exacerbates a modern trend towards isolation. 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • As robotics and automation take on more tasks traditionally performed by humans, individuals may spend less time engaging in social activities outside the home. 
      • This can lead to decreased face-to-face interactions, potentially contributing to feelings of isolation and loneliness.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Example: Imagine a world where robots and automation have taken over many of the tasks that are currently performed by humans. In this world, with robots and automation handling tasks like delivering groceries, cleaning homes, and providing customer service, people may have reduced in-person interactions, opting for online shopping, robotic housekeeping, and chatbot communication for customer support.

The increasing use of robots to perform tasks at home and work is a growing trend, and there are several reasons why this has become more common. From my perspective, I believe that the rise of robotics represents a positive development for society, providing several key advantages.

Firstly, robots can perform tasks consistently over long periods of time. Unlike humans, robots do not suffer from fatigue or distractions, which means they can work efficiently and without errors. This is particularly valuable in tasks that require precision and repetitive action, such as in manufacturing or cleaning. For instance, robots used in factories can assemble products with high accuracy and at a faster rate, reducing the likelihood of mistakes and improving production efficiency.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)

Secondly, the widespread use of robots has the potential to improve the quality of life for humans. By taking over monotonous or physically demanding tasks, robots free up time for individuals to focus on more creative or fulfilling activities. For example, robots performing household chores allow people to spend more time with their families or pursue hobbies, thus enhancing personal well-being. In the workplace, robots can handle hazardous tasks, reducing the risk of injuries and creating a safer environment for human workers.

In conclusion, the integration of robots into everyday life is a positive development. They provide consistent performance, create opportunities for more meaningful human work, and improve safety and productivity.

Introduction
The increasing use of robots at home and in workplaces is a growing trend in modern society. While this development has certain advantages, it also poses significant drawbacks, making it a balanced phenomenon.

Body Paragraph 1
On the positive side, robots are highly effective in performing tasks that are dangerous for humans. For instance, robots can be deployed in hazardous environments such as nuclear plants or during disaster rescue operations, reducing the risk to human lives. Furthermore, robots ensure greater precision in tasks that require delicate handling, such as surgeries or assembling electronic components. This not only improves safety but also enhances efficiency in various industries.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

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Conversely, relying on robots can lead to concerns about security and overdependence. While robots like alarms and cameras have improved surveillance, they can also be susceptible to hacking or malfunction, potentially compromising the safety they aim to provide. Additionally, their widespread use may result in reduced human involvement, leading to job displacement and a decline in skills that are critical for workforce resilience. Such drawbacks underline the need for a balanced approach when incorporating robots into daily life.

Conclusion
In conclusion, the use of robots has both significant advantages and disadvantages, requiring careful management to maximize their benefits while minimizing potential risks.

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