Phân tích"These days there’s no need to go to the live performance for example show or concert concert because what we can see on TV or computer screen is better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"These days there’s no need to go to the live performance for example show or concert concert because what we can see on TV or computer screen is better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

These days there’s no need to go to the live performance for example show or concert concert because what we can see on TV or computer screen is better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: spectators can feel the euphoria of watching their favourite celebrities directly on the spot >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "feel like + sth/ving"
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Being a part of the cheering crowd, live attendees can enjoy their passion to the fullest, which evokes far more excitement and amusement than any recorded versions do. 
        • It allows the audience to truly immerse in every moment with all the dances, cheers, applause, and a sense of community >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic "community" 
      • Example: For example, going to a football match is not only watching players and goals but also being a part of the cheering crowd to warm the environment, and this eagerness to be a part of the spectacle draws me to the stadium quite often.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: attending a show in person is the only chance for die-hard fans to interact and show their appreciation  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: attending live performances gives the audience a chance to have personal interactions with their favorite artists or athletes)
      • Supporting idea: They can even have a chance to interact with people on stage and become an actual part of the performance >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "performance"
      • Example: At K-pop concerts, fans enthusiastically sing, dance, display fan-made banners, and sometimes even get invited to join the idols on stage, showcasing their deep connection and support for their favorite performers.

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