Phân tích "These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề 29/9/2023 & 18/11/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1: There are several reasons for the increasing trend of fathers staying at home to care for their children while mothers work. 
    • Main idea 1: With more women pursuing higher education and career opportunities, they are taking on the role of the primary breadwinners in some families.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: Women have made significant progress in higher education, often obtaining advanced degrees and skill sets that make them competitive in the job market.
      • Example: A prime illustration of this trend is evident in countries like Sweden, where policies promoting gender equality and extensive parental leave options have enabled women to advance in their careers while men take on more caregiving responsibilities. This has led to a significant number of women becoming primary breadwinners in Swedish households, challenging traditional gender roles and contributing to a more balanced distribution of work and family responsibilities.
    • Main idea 2: Societal norms and expectations regarding gender roles have evolved, allowing men to be more involved in parenting and caregiving.
      • Supporting idea: Positive portrayals of involved fathers in media and entertainment have helped reshape public perceptions of gender roles in parenting.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Example: In countries such as Norway, changing societal norms, government policies, and a cultural shift towards gender equality have fostered greater male involvement in parenting and caregiving, exemplified by generous parental leave policies and more balanced responsibilities within households, leading to higher levels of paternal participation in childcare.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: This trend promotes gender equality by challenging traditional stereotypes that confined men to the role of breadwinners and women to homemakers.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Supporting idea:  Economic factors often require dual-income households, and both partners contribute to family finances.
      • Example: Iceland's progressive approach, marked by policies like shared parental leave and support for women in the workforce, showcases how traditional gender stereotypes can be overcome to achieve greater equality in both families and workplaces.
    • Main idea 2: Children benefit from the involvement of both parents in their upbringing, receiving diverse perspectives and caregiving styles.
      • Supporting idea: Having both parents actively involved can provide children with positive role models, helping them form healthy attitudes and behaviors.

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