Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "These days, more emphasis is being placed on university education. Vocational training is not encouraged, and thus there are few qualified trades people. To which extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
These days, more emphasis is being placed on university education. Vocational training is not encouraged, and thus there are few qualified trades people. To which extent do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: Vocational training facilities have given students hands-on opportunity to plan their professional paths >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "facility" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: This practical sector has more overt goals of directing the students toward tangible job paths, in contrast to university education, which places a greater emphasis only on theoretical learning.
- Example: The Carl Benz School in Stuttgart, Germany, provides vocational training in fields like automotive engineering, mechatronics, and IT, offering students hands-on experience through projects like designing and constructing a race car.
- Main idea: Vocational training facilities have given students hands-on opportunity to plan their professional paths >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "facility" tiếng anh
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: Vocational training fields have higher cost-effective values in terms of both time and money.
- Supporting idea:
- While employment-oriented trainings are far less expensive and more accessible, university education is so expensive that some students are unable to pay it and end up taking out loans. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Most university graduates are burdened with student debt and face uncertain job prospects)
- Training schools are cheap, fast, and ease students into steady employment immediately.
- Example:
- Someone who is firmly established in such a job in their early 20s does not have to deal with the pressures associated with university life and its incumbent debts. Instead, they can begin to set aside money for a house or start a family.
- Supporting idea:
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