Phân tích "Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.
    • Main idea 1: Justice will be delivered equally, reducing the involvement of bias, favoritism, or social leverages (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: fixed punishments will have a deterrent effect on society)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This is because once damage has been endured by the society, a corresponding consequence must occur.
        • Once consequences take on a virtue of simplicity, and people become easily aware of how they will be punished, there is a likelihood that criminals would think twice before committing a crime. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime, will reconsider committing this act in the first place)
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: A fixed punishment system would be easy for the court to administer, thus pushing the efficiency of the court services to meet demands of the society. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "administer" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea: If the circumstance of a crime and the motive of the criminals were to be overlooked, there are chances of the offenders being exploited by an incomplete account. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: taking the circumstances of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity)
      • Supporting idea: The judge should evaluate all sides of the story to decide on the best response.
      • Example: It is undoubtedly unfair to punish individuals who were forced to kill the victim for self-defense in the same way as a serial killer. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng cụm "in the same way" tiếng anh

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