Phân tích"There is a common phenomenon that products are commercially over-packaged or over-advertised. Who should be responsible for this? The manufactures or the consumers who tend to buy the products? What is your opinion?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"There is a common phenomenon that products are commercially over-packaged or over-advertised. Who should be responsible for this? The manufactures or the consumers who tend to buy the products? What is your opinion?​ hoặc: Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

There is a common phenomenon that products are commercially over-packaged or over-advertised. Who should be responsible for this? The manufactures or the consumers who tend to buy the products? What is your opinion?

hoặc:

Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm ”Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods” >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase từ "reduce" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 1: supermarkets and manufacturers are responsible for using less packaging because they are the ones who have instituted unnecessary packaging on a large scale >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & word form của "responsible"
      • Supporting idea: supermarkets or retailers should offer discounts to customers who purchase either products with disposable and eco-friendly package or ones without package.
      • Example:
    • Main idea 2: many consumers have very little awareness about the negative impacts that the excessive amounts of product packaging are having on the environment >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt cách dùng impact như động từ & danh từ
      • Supporting idea: Therefore, manufacturers and supermarkets need to minimise the amount of plastic packaging that is used to store and sell their products, or preferably use only biodegradable, recyclable, or environmentally friendly materials. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "preferred" "preferable" & "preferably" tiếng anh
      • Example:
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm ”Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "avoid" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 1: Customers can avoid buying over-packaged goods, making consumer pressure on manufacturers and sellers >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase "customers" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
        • By boycotting certain products from companies who are not being environmentally responsible, consumers can put pressure on these companies to change their attitude towards the materials that they use to package their products. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the more people are likely to buy goods with over-packaging, the more they are manufactured. In contrast, if consumers lower the purchase of such items, it would definitely decrease their production) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "likely" tiếng anh
        • Companies will be forced to act more environmentally responsible by changing and reducing product packaging.
      • Example: many supermarkets and restaurants now use fewer plastic containers and use more recycle paper under consumer pressure. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt LESS và FEWER tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: customers should start avoiding such unnecessary over packing of products >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "SUCH" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
        • Many people prefer over-packaged products as they believe more packaging can protect products like foods from contamination and give them a more hygienic feeling. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "believe" tiếng anh
        • Unless consumer behaviour changes, the amount of packaging of goods will be increasing, let alone reducing it.
      • Example:

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