Phân tích"There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important reason/factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 6/8/2022 & 29/9/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important reason/factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 6/8/2022)

There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important reason/factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: There are people who work hard at their jobs because they actually love the work they do  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely important when choosing a job)>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "job" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: A positive working atmosphere, enthusiastic colleagues and an inspirational boss can make working life much more satisfying, regardless of the profession.   (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Having a good manager or friendly colleagues can make a huge difference to workers’ levels of happiness and general quality of life)
      • Example: Painters do not get paid a lot, but they spend months of concentration and dedication producing masterpieces. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng A lot of & Lots of
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Some people work hard to climb the organisational ladder and want respect and designation.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Having a defined career path can certainly lead to a satisfying working life.
        • Many people’s feelings of job satisfaction come from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn.
      • Example: Indra Nooyi's remarkable journey from her early career at Procter & Gamble to becoming the CEO of PepsiCo showcases her relentless dedication and transformative leadership, making her a trailblazer for women in business and a symbol of success in the corporate world.

• IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm ý khác: Some people choose a career because they want to help others and contribute something positive to society.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải thích: Contribute to sth

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