Phân tích"There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?​"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: music is important as it provides enjoyment and pleasure in daily life  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: music helps to uplift the moods of people)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • People listen to music to relax at home, to relieve the boredom of long journeys, and to dance to in the evening at clubs  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Paraphrase"RELAX"tiếng anh
        • Many individuals use music as a kind of therapy to cure mental illnesses and reduce anxiety.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: music is also an expression of culture, often being an essential part of religious ceremonies such as weddings and funerals or yearly festivals (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Music has been seen as a form of human expression and enjoyment since the dawn of time)
      • Supporting idea: music at celebrations, festivals, and gatherings, generates a sense of pleasure and satisfaction
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea:  Traditional music is said to have its origins in culture and expresses a community’s history, customs, and thoughts.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Culture IELTS
      • Supporting idea: It should be a priority to preserve this since it teaches people about their history, and helps societies remember and retain their national and cultural identity.
      • Example:  Vietnamese classical music, for example, represents the people’s faith and is revered as holy as religion.

THAM KHẢO

It is true that a rich variety of musical styles can be found around the world. Music is a vital part of all human cultures for a range of reasons, and I would argue that traditional music is more important than modern, international music. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách viết Mở bài (INTRODUCTION) IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - ...

There are many reasons why music is of great importance to our lives. Firstly, music is something that accompanies all of us throughout our lives. As children, we are taught songs by our parents and teachers as a means of learning language, or simply as a form of enjoyment. In fact, children delight in singing with others, and it would appear that the act of singing in a group creates a connection between participants, regardless of their age. Later in life, people’s musical preferences develop, and we come to see our favourite songs as part of our life stories. Secondly, music both expresses and arouses emotions in a way that words alone cannot. It is difficult to imagine life without it.... >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Paraphrase từ "reason" tiếng anh

In my opinion, traditional music should be valued over the international music that has become so popular. In fact, International pop music is often catchy and fun, but it is essentially a commercial product that is marketed and sold by business people. Traditional music, by contrast, expresses the culture, customs and history of a country. Traditional styles, such as …(example)…, connect us to the past and form part of our cultural identity. Therefore, it would be a real pity if pop music became so predominant that these national styles disappeared. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn CÁCH PARAPHRASE "FAMOUS" IELTS

In conclusion, music is a necessary part of human existence, and I believe that traditional music should be given more importance than international music. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách viết CONCLUSION các dạng Essay IELTS WRITING ...

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