Phân tích"There are many advertisement directed at children. Parents argue that children are mislead, while advertisers consider advertising a source of useful information. Discuss both views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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There are many advertisement directed at children. Parents argue that children are mislead, while advertisers consider advertising a source of useful information. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm advertisers consider advertising a source of useful information
    • Main idea 1: Advertising introduces children to a variety of products and ideas, contributing to their awareness and understanding of the world around them.
      • Supporting idea: Through advertisements, children gain exposure to various cultures, lifestyles, and innovations, fostering a sense of diversity and broadening their understanding of the world's richness.
      • Example: For example, an ad featuring a family celebrating Diwali in India can pique a child's curiosity about Indian traditions and customs.
    • Main idea 2: Advertisements play a crucial role in shaping children's preferences and helping them make informed choices. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • By showcasing different options, children become informed about the diverse choices they have when making purchasing decisions. 
        • This exposure enables them to make more informed choices based on their preferences and needs.
      • Example: Ads for various sports leagues, clubs, and activities can expose children to diverse options for physical and mental development. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Parents argue that children are mislead & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Advertising misleads children, steering them toward materialistic desires and unrealistic expectations.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Advertisements often present an idealized version of reality, fostering a consumer culture that places undue emphasis on material possessions. 
        • Young minds, still developing critical thinking skills, may find it challenging to discern between the persuasive tactics of advertisers and genuine information. 
        • This, in turn, can lead to a skewed worldview and unhealthy consumption habits.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Example: For instance, a toy commercial might portray children enjoying themselves immensely with the product, neglecting to present downsides or alternative play possibilities, potentially leading to inflated expectations and disappointment when reality doesn't match the advertised portrayal.
    • Main idea 2: The persuasive nature of advertisements often exploits the impressionable minds of children. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Advertisers employ a variety of techniques, such as vibrant colors, catchy jingles, and animated characters, specifically designed to capture the attention of young viewers. 
        • The emotional appeal embedded in these ads can cloud a child's judgment, making it challenging for them to differentiate between entertainment and genuine information.
      • Example: For example, an ad for the latest clothing line might imply that without it, a child will be unpopular or ostracized. This preys on insecurities and can lead children to make choices based on anxieties rather than genuine preferences.

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