May 2, 2023
Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The table shows the worldwide market share of mobile phone manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 3/3/2023)
I. Đề bài
The table shows the worldwide market share of mobile phone manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- The market shares of Nokia, Motorola and Sony Ericsson had an upsurge in 2006 in comparison to their respective shares in the previous years.
- In 2005 and 2006, Nokia had the highest global market share of mobile phones.
- Body 1: Số liệu tăng
- Nokia had the largest share, nearly one-third of the total, in 2005. In the succeeding year, the brand saw an increase of 2.5%.
- Motorola had about the second highest market share in 2005, just a bit over 17%. In the following year, this share increased roughly by 4% >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "following" tiếng anh
- Body 2: Số liệu giảm
- Samsung managed to maintain its third position, despite a decrease to 11.8% in 2006 in comparison to the 12.7% in the previous year.
- BenQ Mobile had the lowest market share, and their shares also dropped to half in 2006 in comparison to 2005 >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "share" tiếng anh
- The combined market shares of all the other manufacturers was more than 19% in 2005 but decreased to slightly over 16%.
- Overall:
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