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I. Đề bài
The table shows the worldwide market share of mobile phone manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- The market shares of Nokia, Motorola and Sony Ericsson had an upsurge in 2006 in comparison to their respective shares in the previous years.
- In 2005 and 2006, Nokia had the highest global market share of mobile phones.
- Body 1: Số liệu tăng
- Nokia had the largest share, nearly one-third of the total, in 2005. In the succeeding year, the brand saw an increase of 2.5%.
- Motorola had about the second highest market share in 2005, just a bit over 17%. In the following year, this share increased roughly by 4% >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "following" tiếng anh
- Body 2: Số liệu giảm
- Samsung managed to maintain its third position, despite a decrease to 11.8% in 2006 in comparison to the 12.7% in the previous year.
- BenQ Mobile had the lowest market share, and their shares also dropped to half in 2006 in comparison to 2005 >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "share" tiếng anh
- The combined market shares of all the other manufacturers was more than 19% in 2005 but decreased to slightly over 16%.
- Overall:
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The table illustrates the market share (thị phần – the percentage of total sales controlled by a company) of several mobile phone manufacturers worldwide in 2005 and 2006.
Overall, Nokia remained the dominant player (người dẫn đầu thị trường – the company with the largest influence or share) in both years, while Motorola experienced a noticeable rise. In contrast, several smaller brands recorded a marginal decline (sự suy giảm nhẹ – a small decrease) in their sales proportions.
In 2005, Nokia accounted for 32.5% of global mobile phone sales, significantly higher than its industry rivals (đối thủ trong ngành – competing companies in the same market). This figure climbed to (tăng lên – increased to) 35% in 2006, strengthening its market dominance (sự thống trị thị trường – the condition of controlling most of a market). Similarly, Motorola saw a substantial surge (sự tăng mạnh – a large increase) from 17.7% to 21.1%, consolidating its position as the second-largest manufacturer.>> 🔥 Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
By contrast, Samsung’s share edged down (giảm nhẹ – decreased slightly) from 12.7% to 11.8%. A similar downward pattern was observed for LG and BenQ Mobile, whose figures fell modestly. Meanwhile, Sony Ericsson experienced a moderate uptick (sự tăng vừa phải – a moderate rise) from 6.3% to 7.4%. The combined category of other brands also witnessed a gradual contraction (sự thu hẹp dần – a steady reduction) from 19.2% to 16.2%.
New Vocabulary
1. Dominant player
Synonyms: leading company, market leader, top competitor
Antonyms: minor participant, small-scale firm, weak competitor
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Nokia remained the dominant player in both years.”
2. Marginal decline
Synonyms: slight decrease, minor drop, small reduction
Antonyms: sharp rise, dramatic increase, significant growth
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Several smaller brands recorded a marginal decline in their sales proportions.”
3. Industry rivals
Synonyms: competitors, opposing firms, business adversaries
Antonyms: partners, collaborators, allies
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4. Market dominance
Synonyms: market control, industry leadership, commercial supremacy
Antonyms: market weakness, limited influence, competitive disadvantage
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...strengthening its market dominance.”
5. Substantial surge
Synonyms: dramatic rise, significant increase, sharp growth
Antonyms: steep fall, notable decline, major drop
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Motorola saw a substantial surge from 17.7% to 21.1%.”
6. Edged down
Synonyms: slipped slightly, dipped marginally, declined gradually
Antonyms: rose slightly, increased gradually, edged up
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Samsung’s share edged down from 12.7% to 11.8%.”
7. Moderate uptick
Synonyms: modest rise, slight increase, small improvement
Antonyms: moderate fall, slight drop, minor decrease
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Sony Ericsson experienced a moderate uptick from 6.3% to 7.4%.”
8. Gradual contraction
Synonyms: steady reduction, progressive decline, slow shrinkage
Antonyms: gradual expansion, steady growth, progressive increase
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Other brands witnessed a gradual contraction from 19.2% to 16.2%.”
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