Phân tích"The use of mobile phone in public places is an antisocial as smoking . Smoking is banned in certain places , so mobile phones should be banned in same way . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 29/7/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The use of mobile phone in public places is an antisocial as smoking . Smoking is banned in certain places , so mobile phones should be banned in same way . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 29/7/2023)

The use of mobile phone in public places is an antisocial as smoking . Smoking is banned in certain places , so mobile phones should be banned in same way . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: The level of disturbance to others caused by using mobile phones and smoking is the same   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"disturb"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Smoking can create a physical discomfort for non-smokers, and loud mobile phone conversations or notifications in public places can also disturb others and disrupt the peaceful environment.
      • Example: A passenger on a plane is trying to sleep when their neighbor's loud ringing phone wakes them up. The passenger asks the neighbor to turn it off, but the neighbor refuses, leaving the passenger unable to sleep and very annoyed.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Both excessive mobile phone usage and smoking can have negative health impacts on individuals and those around them. 
      • Supporting idea: While smoking is associated with direct harm from secondhand smoke, excessive mobile phone usage can lead to issues like eye strain and posture problems.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "associate" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
        • A study published in the journal Ophthalmology in 2017 found that people who used their smartphones for more than two hours a day were more likely to experience eye strain than those who used their phones for less than an hour a day. 
        • A study published in the journal Ergonomics in 2018 found that people who used their smartphones for more than two hours a day were more likely to experience neck and shoulder pain than those who used their phones for less than an hour a day.

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