Phân tích "The table shows information about students studying at an Australian university in 2009" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 20/2/2023)

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The table shows information about students studying at an Australian university in 2009

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  • Overall:
    • More females than males studied Arts while more non-native speakers preferred Science subjects.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the proportion of non-native English speakers and overseas undergraduates took the leading position in science and technology majors)
  • Body 1: Viết về % Females 
    • Most females were in favor of humanities majors (72%) and the educational sector (68%)
    • While there were slightly more than half of females studied Science and Physics (52% and 56%, respectively), they seemed less appealing to technological majors such as information technology and engineering which accounted for roughly 15%. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG TỪ "MAJOR" 
  • Body 2: Viết về % First Language not English + Born outside Australia 
    • Viết về % First Language not English 
      • Approximately half of students whose first language was not English enrolled in the IT department, which was followed by science (45%) and engineering (42%) majors.
    • Viết về Born outside Australia 
      • The physics and IT departments had the highest percentage of enrolment (56%), and engineering held second place with 48%. Other departments were listed in decreasing order as follows: science, education, and humanities, with 31%, 23%, and 20% respectively.

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