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The table shows information about students studying at an Australian university in 2009

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  • Overall:
    • More females than males studied Arts while more non-native speakers preferred Science subjects.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the proportion of non-native English speakers and overseas undergraduates took the leading position in science and technology majors)
  • Body 1: Viết về % Females 
    • Most females were in favor of humanities majors (72%) and the educational sector (68%)
    • While there were slightly more than half of females studied Science and Physics (52% and 56%, respectively), they seemed less appealing to technological majors such as information technology and engineering which accounted for roughly 15%. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG TỪ "MAJOR" 
  • Body 2: Viết về % First Language not English + Born outside Australia 
    • Viết về % First Language not English 
      • Approximately half of students whose first language was not English enrolled in the IT department, which was followed by science (45%) and engineering (42%) majors.
    • Viết về Born outside Australia 
      • The physics and IT departments had the highest percentage of enrolment (56%), and engineering held second place with 48%. Other departments were listed in decreasing order as follows: science, education, and humanities, with 31%, 23%, and 20% respectively.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The table illustrates the proportion (tỷ lệ – the percentage of a total) of students across six departments at an Australian university in 2009, including the percentages of females, those whose first language is not English (ngôn ngữ mẹ đẻ không phải tiếng Anh – native language other than English), and students born outside Australia (sinh ngoài nước Úc – originating from another country).

Overall, female students were predominant (chiếm ưu thế – more numerous or dominant) in arts-related disciplines, while science and technology fields attracted a higher share of non-native English speakers (người không nói tiếng Anh bản ngữ – people whose first language is not English) and overseas students.>> 🔥 Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In terms of gender distribution, humanities recorded the highest percentage of females at 72%, followed by education at 68%. Science and physics also had moderate proportions (mức trung bình – neither high nor low levels) of women, at 52% and 56% respectively. By contrast, technological fields such as Information Technology and Engineering were far less popular among females, accounting for just 17% and 15%, indicating a clear gender disparity (sự chênh lệch giới tính – imbalance between genders).

Regarding language background, nearly half of the students in Information Technology were non-native English speakers (49%), followed by science (45%) and engineering (42%). A similar pattern is seen in the proportion of students born overseas, with Physics and IT both peaking at 56%, while engineering ranked second at 48%. The remaining departments showed considerably lower figures, particularly humanities at only 20%.

New Vocabulary

1. Proportion
Meaning: tỷ lệ – the percentage of a whole
Synonyms: percentage, ratio, share
Antonyms: total, entirety, whole
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “The table illustrates the proportion of students across departments.”

2. Predominant
Meaning: chiếm ưu thế – more dominant or common
Synonyms: dominant, prevailing, leading
Antonyms: minor, insignificant, rare
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3. Moderate proportions
Meaning: mức trung bình – average level
Synonyms: average figures, medium levels, balanced rates
Antonyms: extreme levels, minimal figures, overwhelming proportions
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Science and physics had moderate proportions of women.”

4. Gender disparity
Meaning: sự chênh lệch giới tính – imbalance between genders
Synonyms: gender imbalance, inequality, uneven distribution
Antonyms: gender equality, balance, parity
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “indicating a clear gender disparity.”

5. Peaking at
Meaning: đạt đỉnh tại – reaching the highest point
Synonyms: reaching a peak, hitting a high, topping at
Antonyms: bottoming out, declining to, dropping to
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Physics and IT both peaking at 56%.”

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