Phân tích"The table below shows the percentage of patients saying the service was very good"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR đạt target 6.5)

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The table below shows the percentage of patients saying the service was very good.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Overall:
    • Hospital C performed the most extraordinary as most patients thinked highly of its staff, waiting time, treatment quality and aftercare.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "think" tiếng anh
    • Hospital B received the least praise for almost all studied categories.
  • Body 1: Viết về Hospital C
    • The vast majority of patients (81%) were very satisfied with staff, slightly lower than its treatment quality and aftercare by 3% and 1% respectively while 92% of patients favored its time allocation.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách Paraphrase "I THINK" trong IELTS
  • Body 2: Viết về Hospital A+B
    • Hospital A: 
      • Nearly equal number of people were satisfied with treatment and aftercare service at 85% for the former and 83% for the latter. 
      • While the staff preference was 74%, which was slightly less preferable.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng cấu trúc ĐẢO NGỮ tiếng anh
      • Noticeable is that the lowest number of people (46%) were content with its waiting time. 
    • Hospital B: 
      • The situation became barely satisfactory with the lowest percentages of respondents enjoying its three aspects of staff, treatment, aftercare service at 38%, 68%, 70%, respectively, except waiting time which gained satisfaction from 53% of patients, which was the second highest number in this category.

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