Bên cạnh Phân tích "Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?" IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period." IELTS WRITING TASK 1.
I. Đề bài
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- Most travellers visit abroad for holidays, and this trend has increased over the years.
- Western Europe remained hot favorite travel destination for UK residents over the years. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the most proportion of the UK citizens had a trip to Western Europe to spend their holidays and for business trips HOẶC: Western Europe was their most favourable destination)
- Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
- In total, there was a growing tendency for the UK people to travel into other countries from 1994 to 1998 (nêu số liệu)
- The number of holiday seekers was around fifteen thousand in 1994, and it grew to over twenty thousand in 1998. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "grow" tiếng anh
- The number of people travelling for business also gradually increased (from just over three thousand in 1994 to approximately four thousand four years later)
- Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
- In 1994, just below 20,000 of the UK citizens went into Western Europe, compared with only almost 1000 into the North America.
- After a small drop in 1995, the population of Western Europe visitors remarkably increased and reached the maximum of above 24000 in 1998, which was far more significant than the other two locations (nêu số liệu) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "population" tiếng anh
- Overall:
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