Phân tích "The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world spends numerous government expenditures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world spends numerous government expenditures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world spends numerous government expenditures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: these old buildings attract a lot of international visitors  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the restoration of historical buildings can encourage tourism and boost the local economy HOẶC: these old buildings can be a tourist attraction which can generate more income rather than just being an extra cost with no benefit)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"encourage"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • large number of old buildings are aethetically pleasing and add character to a city, which can greatly boost local tourism. 
        • Since many tourists prefer to travel to different places to explore local infrastructure with antique and historical elements, spending money on such buildings will be worthwhile as it would eventually contribute to the economy of a nation.(IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác:This would increase the revenue of the local tourism industry, which eventually boosts the economy of the country in a longer run)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt INCREASE động từ & INCREASE danh từ
      • Example: 
        • A prime example of this is Hoi An old town in Central Vietnam which has received global attention for its well-preserved traditional houses. Without them, Hoi An would look like any other sprawling cities and few tourists would visit it, resulting in severe losses of jobs and income.
        • Cities like Prague, for instance, are massively popular tourist destinations because people can see magnificent buildings from centuries ago rather than be surrounded entirely by modern structures that are functional but have no soul.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng & Word form của "surround"
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: As such buildings represent long-standing cultural values and traditions of past generations, maintaining them can save a culture from vanishing. 
      • Supporting idea:  
        • Historic monuments represent a crucial part of culture as they offer profound insights into a country’s history and traditions.   (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Old buildings should be restored because they are a link to the past)
        • If such important buildings are demolished, the coming generation will lose an important link to the past.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: If we are always knocking down old buildings to build new ones then we will lose some important history and architectural styles)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "destroy" tiếng anh
      • Example: 

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