Phân tích"The line graph illustrates the proportion of total expenditure in a certain European country between 1960 and 2000"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 10/04/2020)

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The line graph illustrates the proportion of total expenditure in a certain European country between 1960 and 2000 (Đề thi 10/04/2020)

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  • Overall: 
    • Almost every category witnessed a downward trend in the spending except clothing.
    • The figure for food underwent the most dramatic downturn.
  • Body 1: Các category có xu hướng giảm (Food + Leisure + Transport + Fuel)
    • Food >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ Vựng Topic Food IELTS
      • Standing at the highest point (32%) in 1960, the spending on food declined gradually year by year and at the end of the period, the figure concluded at approximately 14%. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: In 1960, roughly 35% was spent on food, ranking first among the five classifications surveyed) >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt within / without/ between / among & middle 
    • Leisure >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng & ideas topic "free time/leisure time" IELTS 
      • The rate of money spent on leisure ranked the second at 20% in 1960 before going down steadily until 1980 >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "till" "untill" tiếng anh
      • The remaining time observed a notable drop in the data (nêu số liệu + năm) and it ended at 13% in 2000 >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "datum" và "data" tiếng anh
    • Transport + Fuel
      • The gap between the figures for transport and energy was 5% in 1960  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Allocations for fuel/energy were insignificant, accounting for only 5%) >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic Energy IELTS
      • Throughout the time show, both of them experienced a stable decrease and seemed to keep the same level of difference with the spending on transport and energy being 5% and 1%, respectively.
  • Body 2: Clothing (có xu hướng tăng)
    • Only the data for clothing rose with the initial point being under 10% in 1960 which surpassed food in 1998 to become the section spent the most, at 15%.

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