Phân tích "The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.

The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

You should write at least 250 words.

You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea 1: Working women tend to be more financially independent (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Women can have more money to take of their children)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When women work, they make money that adds to their families’ financial well-being.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: By contributing to their family’s financial needs, women can often make important decisions for their families as well)
        • This helps pay bills, buy food, and educate children.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"depend"tiếng anh
        • By giving mothers the opportunity to work and earn extra money children can be better provided for than previously.
      • Example: For example, working women are able to buy friends and family special gifts or even help them in emergency situations. Or as a mother, they can take the children on more outings without the worry of being financially strained.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea 2: Working allows women pursue their dreams and talents, as well as works on their goals by pursuing careers of their choice   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"pursue"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Twenty years ago it was common for women to give up work once they had children and devote their time to caring for their children.    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "care" tiếng anh
        • This is no longer the general rule and the provision of professionally-run child care facilities and day nurseries have removed much of the responsibility for child rearing that used to fall to mothers. 
      • Example: 

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