Phân tích"The pie charts and table below show the percentage of tourists travelling to Australia and specific information regarding their staying period, accommodation and the purpose of visit"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 10/6/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The pie charts and table below show the percentage of tourists travelling to Australia and specific information regarding their staying period, accommodation and the purpose of visit" IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 10/6/2023)

The pie charts and table below show the percentage of tourists travelling to Australia and specific information regarding their staying period, accommodation and the purpose of visit.

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  • Overall:
    • In general, the majority of tourists came from Asia and Europe
    • The most common accommodations chosen by travelers were hotels, caravans, or camping, with durations of stay ranging from 7 to 16 days. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "accommodation" tiếng anh 
    • Activities such as sightseeing, swimming, or surfing were popular among these tourists.
  • Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
    • The largest proportions of visitors to Australia were from Asia and Europe, accounting for 37% and 35% respectively, which was approximately twice the percentage of tourists from the United States. 
    • Visitors from other countries made up 10% of the total.
  • Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
    • Viết về Average length of stay
      • Tourists from the United States stayed for 14 days, slightly shorter than Europeans who stayed for 16 days. 
      • Visitors from other countries had an average stay of 10 days, while Asian tourists had the shortest average stay of 7 days. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "average" tiếng anh 
    • Viết về Most popular accomodation
      • Asian and European visitors typically stayed in 5 or 4 star hotels, while travelers from the United States and other countries preferred camping or caravans.
    • Viết về Main activity 
      • Sightseeing was the primary activity among Asian and US tourists. 
      • In contrast, visitors from European countries and other nations showed a preference for beach activities such as swimming, surfing, or sunbathing.

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