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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The charts below show the percentage of electricity consumed by different sectors in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010" IELTS WRITING TASK 1.
I. Đề bài
The charts below show the percentage of electricity consumed by different sectors in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
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- Overall:
- The distribution of electricity remained mostly unchanged, with the exception of aluminium, manufacturing, and other metals.
- Transport and agriculture consumed the lowest percentage of electricity in both years (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: residential use made up the largest proportion while the opposite was true for agriculture and transport) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "opposite" tiếng anh
- Body 1: Viết về category có số liệu giữ nguyên giữa 2 năm (Residential + Commercial + Mining + Agriculture)
- In 2007, just over half of the total electricity was consumed by the residential and commercial sectors, at 28% and 23% respectively >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & paraphrase "respectively"/ "respective"
- Agriculture and transport both accounted for a mere 1% each in 2007 while mining consumed 9% of the total electricity produced.
- There was no change in the figures for these sectors after 3 years >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "figure" tiếng anh
- Body 2: Viết về category có số liệu tăng hoặc giảm
- Other metals: the other metals sector saw an increase from 12% to 18% between 2007 and 2010.
- Manufacturing: the manufacturing and aluminium sectors both consumed 13% of the total electricity used in 2007, after which their consumption fell marginally to 9% and 11% respectively in 2010.
- Aluminium
- Overall:
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