Bên cạnh hướng dẫn rất kĩ cách học IELTS SPEAKING hiệu quả, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn thêm Phân tích đề"The only way to improve the safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences" IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
The only way to improve the safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences. What extent do you agree or disagree?
II. Từ vựng
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic "road safety" IELTS
III. Phân tích
1. Cách viết TOTALLY AGREE
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Opinion essay
- Intro câu 2 & conclusion: totally agree
- Body 1: Lí do số 1 vì sao totally agree quan điểm đề cho, có thể phân tích:
- Main idea: Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: a severe punishment is vital considering its deterrent effect on those who are likely to disobey road regulations)>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Supporting idea:
- There are various types of driving penalty, such as small fines, licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences.
- Drivers and pedestrians become more aware of traffic laws and demonstrate improved law compliance, since they know the serious consequences of their risky actions.
- Example:
- For example, Australia is one of the safest countries all over the world simply because traffic violators are fined more seriously than some other countries. An instance is drivers will be detained if they are found to have drunk driving, and a severe fine will be applied for over speeding rather than just verbal warning in some other places.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
- For example, in Vietnam, a motorist not wearing helmet can be fined with $20 to $40, and thus he will be in fear of facing further punishment and avoid committing another offense
- Body 2: Lí do số 2 vì sao totally agree quan điểm đề cho, có thể phân tích:
- Main idea: More stringent punishments for traffic crimes can be an efficient way to reduce traffic accidents
(IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Imposing more severe punishments on those who commit driving offences can somehow help increase road safety)
- Supporting idea: Once harsher laws related to road safety are implemented >> a notable reduction in the total number of traffic accidents.
- Example: In Vietnam, very loosely enforced regulations = a significant number of annual road casualties
- Main idea: More stringent punishments for traffic crimes can be an efficient way to reduce traffic accidents
2. Cách viết TOTALLY DISAGREE
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
In today's world, there is growing debate about whether imposing harsher penalties for driving offenses is the most effective way to improve road safety. From my perspective, I believe that while stricter punishments can play a role, there are other measures that are equally effective in ensuring road safety.
Firstly, not all road accidents result from traffic violations, as poor road conditions are a significant contributing factor; therefore, a more effective approach would be for the government to rectify these issues by straightening accident-prone curves and widening narrow roads. This is because narrow streets and sharp curves can compel even the most cautious drivers to make errors. Additionally, increasing the number of road signs and enhancing traffic signals could substantially reduce accidents. In fact, improving the visibility and positioning of road signs in high-risk areas could prevent accidents caused by driver confusion or misjudgment, while upgrading traffic signals at busy intersections can help manage vehicle flow and reduce collision risks.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Secondly, adverse weather conditions, including poor visibility from dense mist and rain or slippery roads due to snowfall, can result in serious accidents and challenging driving conditions, necessitating the use of modern technological innovations in car wheels and road designs to address these issues. This was demonstrated by the 2020 multi-vehicle collision on Interstate 90 in the U.S., which was triggered by intense snowfall and icy surfaces. By leveraging innovations such as adaptive traction control systems and enhanced road treatment methods, we can better address these weather-related challenges and reduce the incidence of accidents
In summary, while harsher penalties for driving offenses can contribute to road safety, other effective measures should also be implemented. Improving road infrastructure and utilizing advanced technology to address adverse weather conditions are equally crucial for reducing accidents and ensuring safer roads
3. Cách viết partly
Many individuals argue that implementing harsher penalties for traffic violations is the sole method to enhance road safety. While I acknowledge that stricter punishments play a significant role in encouraging safer driving, I believe that additional preventive measures are equally important for addressing this issue effectively.
On the one hand, imposing stricter punishments for driving offences is a crucial step towards ensuring safer roads. Hefty fines, license suspensions, and even imprisonment can deter reckless behaviors such as speeding, drunk driving, or violating traffic rules. For instance, countries like Sweden and Japan, which enforce stringent traffic laws, have some of the lowest road accident rates worldwide. Such punishments instill a sense of accountability in drivers and discourage dangerous practices, thereby improving overall compliance with traffic regulations.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
On the other hand, road safety can also be enhanced by adopting preventive measures, such as stricter driving tests. Ensuring that drivers possess adequate skills and knowledge before obtaining a license can significantly reduce human errors, which are a leading cause of accidents. Additionally, public awareness campaigns about road safety and the installation of advanced technologies like speed cameras or automated braking systems can promote responsible driving habits. These strategies address the root causes of unsafe driving behaviors, fostering a culture of safety on the roads.
In conclusion, while stricter punishments for driving offences are important, combining them with preventive measures, such as rigorous driver training and public awareness, is the most effective way to enhance road safety.
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