Phân tích "The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on contrary, encourage them to commit a crime. Therefore, some believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI TASK 1 VIẾT THƯ NGÀY 05/7/2020"you are going to take a holiday and your friend agrees to stay at your house. Write a letter to him for"IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa HS đạt 6.0 đi thi thật), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on contrary, encourage them to commit a crime. Therefore, some believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on contrary, encourage them to commit a crime. Therefore, some believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Constant exposure to such news can lead to heightened fear and anxiety among the public.
    • Supporting idea: Individuals, particularly children and vulnerable populations, might develop an exaggerated perception of crime rates and personal safety concerns, impacting their overall well-being and sense of security.
    • Example: In the United States, a study by the Pew Research Center found that 63% of Americans say that they are often or sometimes feeling stressed about the news they see. The study also found that 42% of Americans say that the news makes them feel anxious.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: It encourages viewers to violate the laws (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: those criminal descriptions wield adverse influence on audience, especially fragile youngsters)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Numerous teenagers tend to follow or replicate infractions presented with detailed procedures, methods and tools mainly because they have great curiosity or they want to make a grand impression by proving that they can be better than the person who committed the original crime. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "procedure" tiếng anh
        • Due to vulnerable mentality and lack of ample experience, upon contacting violent programmes, those kids are tempted to follow suit, thus breaking the law and such juvenile delinquencies are too often to be ignored. 
        • If this trend is out of control, then more teenagers will fall victim to those evil reports.
      • Example: In the United States, there have been several cases of teenagers replicating school shootings after being exposed to detailed information about the shootings online. For example, in 2018, a 17-year-old boy in Florida was arrested for plotting to shoot up his school after he had been watching videos of other school shootings online.

• • • Main idea: Numerous would-be criminals can learn skills of committing crimes from similar cases, also the police find it more formidable to crack down on crimes efficiently.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Although the original purpose of crime description is to warn people against offenses and teach them valuable lessons, the fact is that there, indeed, exists a discrepancy between what is desired and what is achieved. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "indeed" 
      • Example: In the Philippines, there has been a recent upsurge in the number of carjacking cases. Police believe that this is due to the fact that criminals are learning from each other and sharing information about how to commit these crimes.

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